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Not bad!
You really need to work on your anatomy and proportions a lot more.

If you haven't picked up figure drawing already, I suggest you practice it, it's a great time investment.
Check out a book called "Figure Drawing For All It's Worth" by Andrew Loomis, it helped me a lot, and it'll surely help you too <3

Good luck man, hoping to see you improve :D

Ikaros223 responds:

Thanks man, the rest of the year I'm really gonna hunker down and try and absorb everything I can. Thanks for the book recommendation I'll pick it up as soon as I can.

[solemn]

ألوان جميلة

MatthewLopz responds:

dis mother fucking commenting in arab and shit im so fluttered.

[a traveller]

The colors and style are very attractive, especially the face, looks great!
Though the anatomy looks a little stiff/odd. (I know it's a cartoon style), but if I were you I'd practice on making it look more dynamic and fit.
One last thing I'd like to note is that the sword is facing the camera forwards, but the body is 3/4, kinda bothered me looking at it.

Great work overall, gave you a follow, keep it up!

graskip responds:

The anatomy is very stiff, you're right. Most of my drawings have that problem, so I should probably work on that.
And I didn't even notice that thing about the sword until you pointed it out. I'm gonna have to pay more attention to stuff like that next time.

Thanks for the comment and a follow, I really appreciate it.

[Frame By Frame - My Next Project]

Man, your style is very attractive!

Mozzaliam responds:

Thank you :D

[slow down!]

needs more dick

nitrile responds:

check out my entire gallery. it contains all the dick you'll ever need, you goofy motherfucker.

[Smile Kate]

Beautiful! Looks really solid, man!
Kate is best gril >u< I tried drawing her before, it didn't look as good as I imagined it would so I didn't share it lol
Are you using Bluefley's square brush?
There are a few tiny things you could add to this to make it more interesting, read about subsurface scattering, it's tiny little trick that you could do to make your drawing look more alive :D

Mushromeo responds:

Holy heck!! How did you pick out what brush I was using just from the image? Haha, magic. But yes, I'd love any tips you can give, just shoot me a message on Skype. I'm aware of subsurface scattering. I tried doing it with the ear if you can see, but I've never really studied it before so I'm still learning colours and saturation and stuff.

Also I have a huge crush on Kate. I related to her the most and just wanted her happiness. If the game had more options aside from Chloe and Warren I definitely would have gone with Kate.

[Quiet - Metal Gear Solid V]

I hope you don't mind a little critique ^u^
I really like the pose and the face looks spot on!

I don't know why, but I feel like the hands aren't really working quite well with the gun, use some reference if you have to, it's not cheating.

The green things here look... uhm... too green? if that's even a thing lmfao
Try replacing it with a dark yellow with half saturation, I think it might look nicer.

Having a good amount of contrast of hue between the main subject and small parts around it can very well affect your composition, dragging the viewers' eyes away from the main focal point (in this case, I suppose the face).

Sabtastic responds:

Thanks, yeah. Those are all good constructive observations.
These always help the most in situations like this where the work is still in progress and actually still fix-able. haha

Cheers.

[Naruto]

Epic, half a star away cuz you didn't make him fully blonde u.u

Demp responds:

I guess I deserve that punishment :p

[red girl il guess]

Neat, great use of chroma aberration :)

MatthewLopz responds:

yeah i literally downloaded photoshop just to use be able to do that. the rest except for that and the blur is made in manga studio.

[Anna]

dat nectar doe

bocodamondo responds:

sorry 'bout that, i forgot to draw it when i was done with lineart, and the lazy in me said dont bother with it and just start coloring